2012年2月4日土曜日

Poem Every Woman Should Have

poem every woman should have

Done Being Friends by Trisha Grace


Book Review Done Being Friends Trisha Grace

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I felt bad giving the review that I did. The book was so wonderful, but the author was so excited to get her work published (who can blame her) that she missed one important step; having an editor proof the copy before sending it to Amazon. It happens to the best of is, we are human and we all make mistakes. I can relate to that. Having self-published a few of my own books I know how hard it can be to try to catch your own mistakes. Your eyes tend to read what you know it is supposed to say.

You can head over to a great site like Fivers World where tasks are available for $5 and find someone to proof, format, and even edit your book. 

Recently I was contacted by the author with some stellar news; it had been edited. Would I like to re-review it for her? Sure!


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It should also be noted that the author does use a pen name, which she has changed from Teresa, to Trisha. I like them both. But just wanted to let my readers know that was not a typo.

Just to give a recap of my review:
The story of two men in love with the same woman and the best friend in love with one of the men never gets old. Each person puts their own romantic twist on the tale. So, while the story and plot itself may ring true to so many other great novels out there, the characters and storyline are different. At least, that is what you hope for when running across something that's similar to what you have already read.
In this tale we are given four friends, Faith, Zac, Dylan and Jessica. In this novel we have a typical case of lifelong friend who are blind to the obvious. Faith, the homely boring girl who thinks no one wants her. Jessica is in love with the friend in love with Faith.
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Sandra Cisneros
Zac and Dylan are both in love with Faith and she only seems to have eyes for Zac. All would appear to be spoiled rich kids, until they prove you wrong. Aside from already knowing that about Faith early on, the rest might surprise you.
When tragedy strikes in Faiths life, she learns the hard way how to run her father's company, and who she can trust. Faith learns she can look within and actually trust herself. She is strong, she is smart, she is beautiful and loved, and she can accomplish anything in life. What I loved most about Faith was that she is not your typical rich girl. Faith uses her fortune for the greater good of the less unfortunate.
A story like that will touch the hearts of everyone.

The author has 100% redeemed herself. A story like this never gets old no matter how many times and ways you tell it. In the first draft there were a lot of words that should have been capitalized.
 There were also a lot of words that were not misspelled, but where not the correct word. Spell check would not fix those since it does not know any better. I should note that in my second passing I did not reread the story, but rather took it on from an editor standpoint and did a proofing on it. In doing so, I found myself rereading my favorite parts. I love the story of Zac and Faith. Every woman should be like Faith, and every Faith should have a best friend, lover, and partner in a man like Zac. Sometimes love is blind. Sometimes it's right under your nose. You don't have to be a believer in God or religion to get the message that is conveyed within these pages. I raise my previous 2.5 stars to 5 out of 5 stars. The book has a purpose. 

The characters are full of life and full of meaning. I could not ask for a more heartfelt story. 



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